Hi there I am in my house desk written this and there has been a zombie outbreak and very few people are alive.There are those crazy people that attack people and befriend the zombies there attacking the gate day after day but every day some die but more come ,anyone who gets this come find me in a flat with a steel gate and we have weapons but no food we are trying to grow food please come we are dying but day after day I weaken and day after day the gate wekens ,they broken in this is the end of me.
November 30, 2016 at 9:09 am
This is an intrigueing opening. Have you read The Enemy by Charlie Higson?
http://www.the-enemy.co.uk/home
What about those full stops?
November 30, 2016 at 9:48 am
I am going to edit now and no is it about zombies?