Hi there my name is Shade! Yeah I know a funny name but I am just someone from Antony’s brain plus we like to have war with other parts of his brain so we can test how strong we are.
Our toughest challenge must be the dragon race because they have giant dragons that could take us out but we have a giant gattiling laser to shoot them down.
Oh I almost forget I need to go to my fighting acedamy anyway see ya!
By Antony!
March 2, 2017 at 4:34 pm
Antony,
This seems like a mixture of many different ideas pressed together. I like your opening – it’s a really strong idea. How might you develop this?